A common messaging mistake that kills trust
🏴 Messaging Benefits at a High-Level 🏴
In other words → making big promises on the value of your product.
❌ These promises are NOT BELIEVABLE
Instead, it’s far more effective to message benefits that are:
âś… Realistic
âś… Closer to what your product actually does
Take
for example (see image)
⚫️ Their promise → “Close more deals”
🤔 Wait, what?!
How does a video recording chrome extension close more deals?
💢 It’s just too far from what the product actually does!
It would be far more impactful to start closer to the product…
🔵 And then tell the connected story of how a user might reach that big outcome:
1st Order Benefit
↳ Improve prospect engagement on your messages
👉 If you improve engagement on messages you get…
2nd Order Benefit
↳ More chances to influence prospects
👉 If you influence more prospects you can…
3rd Order Benefit
↳ Generate more opportunities
👉 If you generate more opportunities you might…
4th Order Benefit
↳ Close more deals
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So remember, when you are crafting product messaging…
→ Keep your benefits realistic
→ Aim for believable value over a big promise
Ben Wilentz
Founder, Stealth Startup